Spelling
I have corrected my spelling by adding in a 'n' and 'd' to make it to 'planned'. By doing this it shows that i know how to correct my spelling, this will also help me when creating the rest of the presentation.Punctuation
I corrected my work when i changed a sentence which was too long by placing a semi-colon to show that there is two sentence in one. This shows that i know different punctuation and how to use it in the right areas.
Grammar
I checked my grammar on my work and i found this mistake which is the one in red. The reason why this is wrong is because its not formal when in a presentation. this really helped me find more mistakes just like this which makes the presentation more professional.
Clarity of expression
When going through my presentation I found a mistake which is a good example of 'clarity of expression' which means that it is not clear or understandable. As you can see i accidentally put 'it' instead of 'she' which can be bad when presenting because it wont be clear who you are talking about. this has help me look out for mistakes just like this one.
Structure of content
When i was making the slides for my presentation I accidentally put too many images on one slide, also one of the images was too large and covered some of the text which makes it look scruffy and unable to read.
2.Electronic checks
Spelling
When doing electronic spelling checks i found this mistake, i corrected this by right clicking the word and selecting the correct spelling.
When i was going through my presentation looking for mistakes i found this one above. I changed the full stop to a question mark because i was asking a question.
Grammar
Here i found another mistake which was easy to fix because if i right click on the mistake i can 'delete the repeated word' which is an easy tool to use.
Thesaurus
I used the thesaurus to find a better word for 'sad' and i did which was 'depressed', which makes the sentence more powerful.
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